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RPGing
Nov 27, 2007 16:22:29 GMT -5
Post by Administrator on Nov 27, 2007 16:22:29 GMT -5
HOW YOUR POSTS SHOULD LOOK:
Houdini stood, watching as a large passenger boat began to drift away to sea. She could see people crowded at the railing waving and some crying, as though it would be there last look at New York. She pitied those who were staying, here, on the dock, more than those who were leaving. The ones who were staying and waving goodbye would still have there daily routines, but it would feel as though something was missing. Houdini knew that feeling all too well.
She decided to leave so that she could get a head start of the crowd before being trampled. She turned swiftly, a bit more swiftly than intended, and barreled into someone who had been standing near her, almost pushing them into the water.
"Oh - wow...Im sorry..." she gasped, her southern twang loose in her words. Her mahogany colored curls fell around her shoulders as she reached out a hand to steady the person.
--> Longer than that would be much appreciated! <--
If you dont have time to write out a good post, then dont write it. Dont rush through it just to get it done. Seriously people, SPELLCHECK!
HOW YOUR POSTS SHOULD NOT LOOK:
As houdini turned to leave the dock she bumped into some1 and said oh sorry.
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RPGing
Nov 27, 2007 16:28:23 GMT -5
Post by Administrator on Nov 27, 2007 16:28:23 GMT -5
This RPG board is in 3rd person! Incorrect: I walked up to him and started talking. Correct: Sierra walked up to Ivellios and started talking. Incorrect: I was thirsty so I went to get a cup of water to drink. Correct: Duke walked out of the room in search of a drink of water.
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RPGing
Nov 28, 2007 3:13:27 GMT -5
Post by Administrator on Nov 28, 2007 3:13:27 GMT -5
When you want to start a new story - Jut go to the board where you want your story to take place (aka, The lodging house, the bridge, ect..) and start a new thread. You should label it something that fits with what your story/convo is about.
EXAMPLE:
Subject: An accidental Friend
Body: Houdini stood, watching as a large passenger boat began to drift away to sea. She could see people crowded at the railing waving and some crying, as though it would be there last look at New York. She pitied those who were staying, here, on the dock, more than those who were leaving. The ones who were staying and waving goodbye would still have there daily routines, but it would feel as though something was missing. Houdini knew that feeling all too well.
She decided to leave so that she could get a head start of the crowd before being trampled. She turned swiftly, a bit more swiftly than intended, and barreled into someone who had been standing near her, almost pushing them into the water.
"Oh - wow...Im sorry..." she gasped, her southern twang loose in her words. Her mahogany colored curls fell around her shoulders as she reached out a hand to steady the person.
And then you will await a reply from whoever wants to join you here. So Spot conlon could see your thread on his Docks and he may post something about him being the one who was almost knocked into the water ect...
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