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Post by Jack Kelly on Feb 1, 2008 10:50:53 GMT -5
It was the most boreding day of his life. He didn't have anything to do. He was done selling the papes but now he has nothing to do. His sister, Jinks, was taking care of her own newsies and didn't want to talk to him.
"'Ow come dere ain't anyting ta do around 'ere anymore." complained Jack to who ever was listening. He didn't really care anymore. The day was going by too slow. Just a couple more papes and would be have way to a Santa Fe ticket. He couldn't wait to get out of here.
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Post by Administrator on Feb 2, 2008 4:27:16 GMT -5
Jack, You're spelling and grammar isn't suited quite right for a Canon. Im sorry, but I'm going to have to put Jack up for grabs. REJECTED
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