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Snitch
Jul 9, 2008 14:09:47 GMT -5
Post by shades on Jul 9, 2008 14:09:47 GMT -5
Snitch had been selling his papes, and he was almost done. He had about 3 left. Snitch saw a man with a suit on. He caught a glimpse of something gold. "Excuse me mistah, would you care to buy a pape?" The man turned around and looked at Snitch. He looked disgusted. "Sure young man, how much is this paper?" Snitch looked very pleased with himself. " Only a penny mistah." The man dug in his pocket. "Here." He grabbed the paper out of Snitch's hand. " Thank you'se."
As the man was walking away, Snitch kept his eye on the pocket watch. The man had stopped to look at the paper. Snitch carefully sneaked up to the man, and used his hand to grab the watch. He almost touched the man's elbow. He yanked it out of the hoity-toity man's jacket and ran.
" Hey! Stop! Thief, thief! He stole my pocket watch! Get him!" The man yelled after Snitch. Snitch was running all the way into an alley. He got rid of the man. He sat down and started laughing so hard! He got back up. He felt hungry, so he made his way to Tibby's.
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Snitch
Jul 13, 2008 11:40:50 GMT -5
Post by Jack Kelly on Jul 13, 2008 11:40:50 GMT -5
Close, Shades. You have a good post, but I don't think you have a good grasp of Snitch's character. I just couldn't see him stealing a pocket watch. If you were to apply for a different canon, one that you think you have a good grasp of, then I think I would consider it.
REJECTED (for now)
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